Do a search of your current wip to find the word look, then post a few paragraphs around that word.
Oy, I use that word too much!
here's my excerpt:
I peeled out of
my sopping clothes, then wrapped myself in the blanket. It was silver. And
crinkly.
Dig offered his coat, but since he's sized like a twig, I
couldn't even fit both arms in it and still drive. Which I had to do because
Dig is a horror show of driving, putting everyone's life at risk. Trust me on
that point.
So I ended up wearing the jacket like a cape with it
flapping out behind me as we sped down the trail back home. Did I mention I was
draped in a silver blanket? Wearing my helmet with star stickers? And that's
where we met Grandpa Morris coming toward us on his quad.
Curses. I'm so
busted. "Grandpa, this isn't how it looks ... " I trailed off
when I saw his face.
Anyone want to play, leave me a comment if you are going to post so I can read yours!
