Our lake opened up today! It's so exciting to see the water after months of ice cover. It makes me want to grab my kayak! My dog is hoping I grab the canoe instead so she can come.
My editor likes the final revisions on Dogsled Dreams! So that part is finally done. Now I work with the designer. Then it goes to PDF, then the senior editor takes a gander, then I approve that. Lots of steps. Now I understand why it takes so long! I'm still waiting for the cover, stay tuned for that.
I celebrated the end of revisions for all of 20 seconds, then I started on my wip ICE DOGS. An agent asked me for a rewrite several months ago, but I discovered I could not work on both projects at the same time.
Joanna introduced me to something called the shrunken manuscript technique. It involves smooshing your entire story together into 30 pages using itty-bitty font size. Then I marked the heart-pounding scenes. It's a very cool technique to take a look at the big picture. Now I know I need to cut some of the beginning to start more in the action. You can also see how much dialogue you have this way. I'm going to use colour markers to highlight scenes with different characters too.
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That's so exciting that your editor liked the final revisions. Yay! How funny that we both posted about the shrunken manuscript technique today. I can't wait to try it and see the manuscript all spread out in front of me. Happy revising!
Thanks for the shout-out! Hooray for the shrunken manuscript, it certainly points out where the problems are. :-) Good luck with those revisions!!
I had never heard of that before-I suppose it depends on your word count.
This is a new one for me. Sounds like a great idea. Will have to try it. Thanks, Terry.
Bev
You must be excited to jump into revisions! Good luck with them. And the shrunken manuscript is one idea I haven't heard of yet. :)
Add me to the "never heard of that" club...sounds interesting, I'll check it out!
And my, what a beautiful day there. Many congrats on the final revisions being done! Woot! :-)
I saw this over at Anna's blog, and am SO EXCITED to try it. I'm going to use jewels and glitter. And, it sounds like things are moving along wonderfully with Dogsled Dreams!
Excitement and more work! That is a sign of success though, right? The tiny font trick is interesting.
Sounds like you are moving right along with your manuscript. I am anxious to start revisions on my story, but I guess I need to be more patient, but patience is not something that I'm blessed with. Your lake is beautiful!
Congratulations on completing final edits! Hooray!
"Shrunken Manuscript" is a great idea--I think I'll try it myself! Good luck tackling the new one.
Anna, I know, great minds...
Joanna, thanks for the great link to this new technique
David, this works for most normal length ms.
Beverly, it's neat to see the whole thing spread out.
Laura, I'm mostly nervous doing revisions, I don't want to wreck it!
Jamie, thanks!
Heather, jewels and glitter sound like fun!
Janet, when you get it back covered in red, you'll think "I was looking forward to this?" but it does get done eventually.
PJ, I'm thinking I'll always be working, so may as well enjoy it.
Catherine, Thank you! and thanks for stopping by!
Wow - very cool idea! I love it.
Congrats on your edits being done. Woo-hoo! :-)
I've never heard of the shrunked manuscript. How cool is that?
Gorgeous photos of your lake!!
I've never heard of this technique, but it's a great one :)
Congrats!
I attended Darcy Pattison's revision retreat last fall. Each of us were to bring a shrunken manuscript to work with. It was so helpful to see the story spread out, marked here and there with different symbols and colors. A great visual to see how things are working overall.
I have yet to try this, but really need to one of these days.
I've never heard of this shrunken ms technique! Very interesting. And congrats on your editor liking your final revisions!
Interesting stuff - and yay on the revisions being done!! Woo Hoo! OMG you live in that pic? It's gorgeous. Lucky ;o)
Oh my god - where do you live? It's such a gorgeous place! Ah to live by the lake.
Shrunken manuscript technique sounds very useful. I will check it out. Thanks for posting about it. :-))
Very interesting! I love this idea. I'll have to try it out.
Terry
Is Dogsled Dreams aimed at the MG or YA audience?
So glad to hear your editor liked the final revisions. And I love the idea of a shrunken manuscript. I'm wondering how I could do something similar with a full blown novel...
Wow! I have to try that technique. Just looking at your manuscript laid out like that was impressive. Sounds like your book is really moving along in the process and I can't wait to see your cover!!
Nelsa
I've never tried that!
And grab the canoe so your dog can tag along.
Whew! the comments! Awesome. Few answers:
Dogsled Dreams is my debut novel that is being released in January. It's a middle grade novel about a girl who wants to run a race. I can't wait for the cover!
Ice Dogs is my young adult manuscript that I've had an agent ask for a rewrite on. It's about a completely different girl and her dogteam who gets lost in the bush with a dude with a secret. It's a survival story.
Ice Dogs is what I had spread out across the floor. I'm still currently staring at it - a little stuck but hopeful that my muse will come visit me later.
I just read about the " Shrunken Manuscript" idea. I think I now found a useful tactic to revise my manuscript that I actually like so thank you Terry for sharing that info with us!
I've never heard of the shrunken manuscript before. It sounds like a great way to also analyze the pacing.
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How fun to meet another debut author, and I see from your sidebar that you know my friend Amy A Cook who helped form the indie debut logo. Small world :) thanks for stopping by my blog .. look forward to knowing more about your writing and maybe sharing some of this journey together!
Oh my gosh, that is the coolest idea EVER. We are definitely going to try this!
I've never heard of the Shrunken Manuscript. I am so going to check that out. It sure beats flipping around for hours trying to get to the heart of things. Thanks for the tip. So going over there!
Holy cow!! 30 pages? That's amazing. I might need to try that. I'm going over to Joanna's blog to check it out right now.
And your lake is beautiful!
I'm like you -- I can only work on one thing at a time. Have fun with the new WIP. The shot of the lake is gorgeous!
I've seen this before, but never tried it...very cool idea!
oh! im loving this - must go try!
Wow! I'd be excited about seeing the water too if I lived in an area with so much snow. And the shrunken manuscript is a great idea. I'll have to try it on my current WIP once I finish my current round of revisions.
What a wonderful blog! I'm so glad that I finally found it. And the shrunken manuscript--what a great idea. I'll have to try this. Thanks!!!
OOoh, Terry--what an exciting way to pinpoint the highs v whites! Thanks for sharing this technique with us! ;)
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